出国留学文书个人陈述的开头怎么写有吸引力?文书一段有趣的开头是读者的福音。SOP的首段,一定要想办法抓住读者的眼球,让他们有想要看下去的欲望。首段至少要三句话,它可以是独特的、幽默的;可以是一段emotional的personal的经历,也可以是人生中一个转折点;可以是作者经历的一场自然灾害、大事件,也可以是对某种严重社会现象的忧虑。万事开头难不过一旦写好SOP的开头,文书思路就会变得开阔又流畅。
下面介绍几种容易吸引读者眼球的首段写法:
1.顿悟
SOP的首段,通常需要直截了当地点明你对某专业领域的兴趣。那如何点明呢?如果你能用一种“顿悟”的方式去表明,将很容易引起读者的兴趣。这种“顿悟”可以是一个你决定进入这个领域的瞬间,或者一个你发现自己兴趣的瞬间。
Example: When the old man urinated on my leg, it ran down my pants and into my shoe. I could not let go of him, as I was holding him up, trying to move him from a wheelchair onto the bed. That’s when I first realized that medicine was not going to be just starched white lab coats and golf at four. I looked again at medicine, the actual practice of medicine on real people, and saw that it often involved messy fluids, imperfection, and an element of surprise…(具体描述一个moment)
不要害怕用一些生动的细节描述来表达这些“顿悟”的瞬间,有时候正是这些生动的细节描述抓住了读者的心。“顿悟”也可以通过一段具体经历表现出来。用一段具体经历,尤其是决定你对某领域产生兴趣的经历作为SOP的开头,不但可以从首段就展现你对该领域了解的深度,而且也能开篇就展现你的个人能力和品质、以及对所申请领域的热情
2. 暗示
另一种通过首段吸引读者眼球的方法,是通过“暗示”更多精彩内容在后头来抓住读者的心,让他们有一种继续往下读的欲望。这可以通过抛出一个问题来实现,也可以给一个吸引人的场景,或抛出一种强烈对比,来引起读者探索问题的兴趣。
Example: 抛出问题:“Why in the world do you want to go to law school? Heaven knows we don't need any more lawyers.” Having worked for the large, prestigious law firm of Bells & Motley since mid-July, it continues to surprise me how frequently I have been asked that particular question. (短开头欲扬先抑)
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3. 独特
如果你本身有什么与众不同的独特经历,那么将这种独特性在首段中就点出来,将会非常吸引读者眼球。(进入独特性挖掘)。
Example: At the age of forty-eight, I left my two adult children, my husband, and the dishes in the sink, and moved into a college dorm to become a freshman. And because I was a first-generation college student, I had no one to tell me that a college dorm is not the serene, academic refuge I was always imagined.