申请出国留学的personal statement(PS)怎么写?

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Personal statement在一些国外学校也被称之为motivation。主要是像对方表述你的背景,能力,兴趣和经历等。因为我们国内的教育基本上都是以分数判定的,所以很多小伙伴在自主申请国外大学的时候,都不是很清楚该如何写一篇规范的personal statement。

申请出国留学的personal statement(PS)怎么写?图1

申请学校名和专业名

首先,personal statement内容需要确认你想要申请什么学校和什么专业。

(有些人可能一次申请很多所学校,所以为了不在申请的时候发错文件,会尽量避免在Personal statement中提及学校名和专业名。但有些人觉得不在personal statement中提这些的话,是一种很降印象分的行为。因为,对方导师会看出来,觉得你只是很随便的在申请,我们学校对你来说并不是特别的选择。)

在personal statement中需要说明,为什么你想申请对方学校和这个专业?你的经验,技能,知识如何契合这个专业?像我们国际生就还要回答为什么要来对方国家读书?英语水平如何?

personal statement-What to write about

1.Why you are applying-your ambitions and what interests you about the subject.course providers and higher education

2.What makes you suitable -any relevant skills, experience or achievements gainedfrom education work or other activities

Extracurricular activities

International and EU studentsi As an international student there are a few extra things you shouldmention

1.Why you want to study in the UK

2.Your English language skills and any English courses or tests you've taken

3.Why you want to be an international student rather than study in your owncountry

personal statement写什么?

1你为什么要应用你的抱负,你对这门学科感兴趣的是什么?课程提供商和高等教育?

2你适合什么?从教育工作或其他活动中获得的任何相关技能、经验或成就

课外活动

国际学生和欧盟学生作为一名国际学生,有几件事情你应该提及

1.你为什么想在英国学习

2.你的英语语言技能和你参加的任何英语课程或考试

你为什么想成为国际学生,而不是在自己的国家学习?

想好personal statement要写什么之后,开始建立框架。仔细的向对方介绍你自己。

申请出国留学的personal statement(PS)怎么写?图2

personal statement第一段,介绍你是谁?从哪里毕业?想要就读哪里?未来的目标是什么?

The ultimate objective of my professional career is to equip people with the necessary skills to solve problems indeveloping countries, particularly in terms of educational development, and to propose effective solutions whichmake good use of local people and things to solve educational problems in developing countries. I believe thatworking for a development consultant agency dealing with educational development projects will allow me to attain

我职业生涯的最终目标是培养人们解决发展中国家问题,特别是教育发展问题的必要技能,并提出有效解决办法,以充分利用当地人民和事物解决发展中国家的教育问题。我相信,为一家从事教育发展项目的发展顾问机构工作能让我达到目标。

第二段,仔细的说你之前的学习经历,比如高中,本科,硕士。从中学习到了什么能力?

At graduate school, I went on a tr ip to the Kubuchi desert near Mongolia in China where I took part in a forestationproject. Through this tour, I developed a strong interest in cultural differences and wealth gaps in the country andbetween rich and poor nations. I was moved by the seriousness and would like to devote myself to working in thearea of international cooperation in the future

在研究生院里,我去了蒙古附近的库布奇沙漠,在那里我参加了一个造林项目。通过这次旅行,我对这个国家以及富国和穷国之间的文化差异和财富差距产生了浓厚的兴趣。我被这种认真感动了,并愿意今后致力于国际合作领域的工作。

personal statement第三段,细节描述你的工作经验,最好是与你想申请的专业对口的经验,或者是与对方大学有关的经验。

After graduating, I chose to work for an NGO to learn about in tional cooperation. That was a great experiencefor me: however, I could come to understand the difficulty of working as a NGO member in developing countrieswithout expertise. To get expertise and work experience, I decided to become a teacher. After working for 3 yearsas a public high school teacher in Japan, I applied to a volunteer work program for 2 years in a developing countryMy job was to lecture and introduce methods of how to teach in Japanese primary schools in the area of mathematicsto local primary school teachers in Spanish in Honduras, Central America. I worked closely with the local Board ofEducation in the village and lived with a Honduran family. I dedicated myself to my work and really enjoyedcommun icating with Honduran people. My counter part who was a superintendent of the educational affairs in thevillage had a great passion for education and worked more than standard Japanese workers. Through workingwith her, I understood the importance of local people being educated enough to decide and solve problems intheir community

毕业后,我选择为一个非政府组织工作,以了解国际合作。这是我的一次很好的经历:然而,我能够理解作为一个非政府组织成员凭借专业知识在发展中国家工作的困难。为了获得专业知识和工作经验,我决定成为一名教师。在日本的一位公立高中教师工作了3年后,我申请了一个在发展中国家的志愿者工作项目。我的工作是在洪都拉斯,中美洲的西班牙当地小学教师那里讲课,介绍如何在日本小学教数学的方法。我与当地教育委员会密切合作,与洪都拉斯一家住在一起。我全身心投入工作,非常喜欢和洪都拉斯人交流。我的对手是村里的教育事务主管,他对教育有着极大的热情,并且比标准的日本工人工作得更多。通过与她的合作,我明白了当地人受过足够教育以决定和解决社区问题的重要性。

申请出国留学的personal statement(PS)怎么写?图3

personal statement第四段,如果你能成功来贵校读书的话,你将如何运用你这些知识,技能,经验来帮助自己更好的适应学习?

To achieve my objective, it is imperative to plan and manage the projects appropriately based on deepcommunication and profound analysis of social, olitical and economic aspects in the local area. I strongly believehat I need a more sophisticated and wider knowledge. Thus, the Education and Development program at yourinstituion is the best course for me because this course will allow me to specialize and develop a deep understandingand better prepare me for my future goal

为了实现我的目标,有必要在深入沟通和深入分析当地社会、政治和经济方面的基础上,适当地规划和管理这些项目。我坚信我需要更复杂、更广泛的知识。因此,贵校的教育与发展课程对我来说是最好的课程,因为这门课程将允许我专攻、深入了解,并为我未来的目标作好准备。

personal statement最后一段,夸奖一下对方学校的学术能力等,并说明如果顺利毕业后,你的之夜规划是什么?

In the academic course, I propose the following academic objectives. First, I want to gain a fundamentalknowledge of educational developments, and pursue processes contributing to not only economic developmentbut real happiness for local people. Secondly, I want to learn a variety of methods which will in turn allow thelocal people to become vitalized and independent. Finally, I want to obtain the practical ability to manageprojects and communication skills to build strong mutual understandings with clients

在学术课程中,我提出以下学术目标。首先,我希望获得教育发展的基本知识,并追求不仅有助于经济发展而且有助于当地人民真正幸福的进程。其次,我想学习各种方法,这些方法反过来又能使当地人变得活跃和独立。最后,我希望获得管理项目的实际能力和沟通技巧,与客户建立牢固的相互理解。

Wordsunny建议大家在进行personal statement(PS)排版的时候要注意:字体选择Time New Roman,字体大小建议为11号;personal statement(PS)文章左右对称,一页A4纸内容(太多内容会让对方没兴趣阅读的)。

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